Fairly successful crit with 99% positive feedback with a few comments that I will take into account. I will use this as my general action plan for the following week. I will upload some final images of boards over the weekend when all the type has been added.
General Comments
Spices brief photographed well
Maybe include a hand or something else to give an idea of scale
Great documentation of experimental product, will there be a final product?
Clear and simple presentation
Amazing photography for Upfront Project - boards are consistent and clear
BLog is clear - can see practical devellopment, work photographed well
Blogs Content
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Blog has a clear development, demonstrating & describing the process... no issues here
Good blend of visuals and written annotation
Easy to follow and get a good understanding of your work
Blogs Organisation
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All easy to locate - labels are perfect, all content is easy to find no problems
The amount of scribd documents slows the page down
All posts clearly labelled and documented - easy to navigate through
Presentation Boards content
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For all boards make sure the first board is high impact
Include shots of the products in environment / context photos
Boards are clear but might have been better with products as well as boards
This would aid the understanding of the physical presence of the products
Presentation Boards
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Consistent format - layout is fine, no boards stand out as being different
Some information mixed up on the boards
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